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Chlollie Fanfic: Beauty in the Breakdown V - Feeling Good, Chapter 2


I say it all the time: feedback/comments give us inspiration, and this entire chapter is proof positive of that.

 

I have this lovely f-lister, purple_moon123; she’s amazing.  Upon reading the first chapter, she kindly left me three very detailed comments (thanks, bebe!), and in one of them she had this question for me:

 

Ummm where be this distraction scene??? I need it like NOW!!! …And pray tell what would these compelling arguments be!!! Dirty minds want to know!!!!!”

 

So here it is.  For purple_moon123, with lurve from me to you.  Dirty Minds of the World, unite!!! ;-)

 

Enjoy.  Rated NC-17, so no minors here.  And if you spot any typo’s, feel free to point them out to me.  I edited half asleep.  

 

Title:              Beauty in the Breakdown V – Feeling Good

Author:          BabyDee
Pairing:          Chlollie

Rating:           NC-17

Warnings:     Sexxorz

Timeline:      Season 9

Disclaimer:   All characters belong to the CW & DC comics. 

Summary:     Chloe’s confidence begins to soar as her relationship with Oliver goes public.

Feedback:      …bring it, bebe. J

 

Written for sxymami0909, based on my favourite song on the Chlollie playlist she sent me. :-)

 

Awesome banner by jennyspring. You rock! J


Read Chapter 1 here. 


 

Chapter 2

 

Fish in the sea, you know how I feel
River running free, you know how I feel
Blossom in the trees, you know how I feel

It's a new dawn
It's a new day
It's a new life
For me…


….And I'm feeling good

 - Feeling Good, by Muse

 

 

Chapter 2

 

 

“Wow,” Lois breathed as she watched from the window as the sleek car shoot off down the street.  “Chloe and Oliver…how did I miss that?  Six weeks, and I didn’t even have a clue!”

 

“Yeah, she certainly kept that pretty quiet,” Clark grumbled as he dropped the curtain and went back into the room.  “Oliver Queen, of all people…”

 

“I had no idea they were even close!” Lois said in amazement, folding her arms.  “I mean, I know they must have interacted in social circles once or twice because of mutual acquaintances like me or your Mom – but when did they even become friends?  When did they start seeing each other on a basis regular enough to even…?” she laughed and shook her head.  “I still can’t get my head around it!”

 

“Me neither,” Clark replied sourly.  “Didn’t take her long to move on, did it?” 

 

Lois frowned.  “That’s not fair, Clark.  She and Jimmy had broken up long before he died, and even that was almost a year ago now.”

 

Clark blinked. “Jimmy?” 

 

She shrugged.  “Who else would you be talking about?” 

 

Clark opened his mouth to reply but stayed silent, a ruddy flush staining his cheeks.  Lois’s eyes widened as realisation dawned.

 

Clark…you and Chloe were never like that,” she said softly.  “You never shared her feelings.  It’s selfish of you to think she’d quietly carry a torch for you forever.” 

 

“Hey, I never said it was me,” he said defensively. 

 

Lois stared hard at him for a long time before giving him a sad smile.  “No; but you didn’t have to.” 

 

*** 

 

The smooth purr of the Ferarri’s engine was comfortably soothing.  Chloe and Oliver sat in comfortable silence as he drove them swiftly but safely back towards Metropolis, his focus on the road ahead.  Even though the car came fully equipped with Cruise Control, Oliver never used it, preferring to depend on his own judgement instead and remain in control of the vehicle and the road. 

 

Chloe gazed at him from behind her shades, thanking her lucky stars that such a wonderful man found his way to her at the perfect time.  Sensing her eyes on him he glanced over and raised his brow in silent query.  She smiled, a large reassuring grin, and rested one hand on his thigh.  Oliver returned her smile and placed his hand on top of hers, giving her fingers a quick but firm squeeze. 

 

She stared down at his hand and felt her cheeks grow warm.  Ah, those hands.  The things he could do with those hands…

 

***

 

“So how am I expected to behave at this thing, anyway?” she asked him as she stepped out of the shower, towelling her hair vigorously. 

 

Oliver glanced at her briefly and carefully drew the shaver over his chin.  “Just be yourself, Chloe.  You’ll be fine.” 

 

“Ha.  Easy for you to say, you go to these swanky functions all the time,” she retorted.  “Not to mention the fact that they probably taught you how to socialise at public gatherings in that fancy Prep School of yours…” 

 

“It’s just a gathering of people with deep pockets who want to do a little something for charity,” he said patiently.  “That’s all.  And I don’t know why you’re so apprehensive about this; you’ve taken down criminals and battled aliens without so much as batting an eyelid.  All we’re going to do is smile and chow down a very expensive dinner.” 

 

“Yeah, and there’s probably six different types of spoons for the starter alone!” she protested. 

 

Oliver smiled indulgently.  “You’re fretting for nothing, Chloe.  Trust me.” 

 

She made a wry face.  “Well, as long as no-one asks me to give any speeches, I should be fine.”  She finished rubbing the excess water out of her hair and hurriedly dried herself off, reaching down to dry the water off her calves and feet. 

 

Maybe it was all those long months with only computer screens and consoles for company, but she was feeling extremely nervous about interacting with real people tonight.  She frowned as she patted her toes with the towel, wishing they could give the gala a miss altogether. 

 

In the midst of her wandering thoughts, she felt Oliver’s unmistakeable touch; a single finger, trailing slowly down the centre of her spine till he got to the small of her back. 

 

“You missed a spot,” he said, his voice low and gravelly with desire.  “You towel down like a drill sergeant every single day, but you always…miss…that…spot.”

 

A smile played at the corners of her mouth as his hands held her hips in a gentle yet firm grasp and pulled her up against him, her back against his front.   Already she could feel the evidence of his desire pressing against her backside, and she leaned her hips back against his towelled waist, pressing against his thickening length. 

 

“We need to be at Curbishley Hall in exactly three and a half hours,” she murmured, watching their reflections in the full-length mirror as his hand crept over her stomach. 

 

“All I need is the half-hour,” he whispered into her ear, his husky voice full of promise as his fingers lightly tickled her belly. 

 

“That’ll do,” she giggled, and started to turn to face him. 

 

To her surprise, he held her fast where she was.  “No; like this,” he said softly, his dark eyes glinting appreciatively as he studied her naked form in the mirror. 

 

There was something infinitely erotic about watching Oliver just look at her; always had been.  But this was different; it was as though she was looking at him looking at her, but through his eyes. 

 

And he knew what he was doing, because his next words confirmed it.

 

“I want you to see what I see, Chloe,” he whispered against her ear, making her shudder.  One hand splayed across her midriff and travelled upward to cup her breast, his fingers closing around her stiffening nipple. 

 

***

 

He hadn’t planned on making love to her until later on in the evening.  He really hadn’t.  But just as he was finishing up his shave, she’d stepped out of the shower and proceeded dry to herself off…and sure enough, there it was.  That line of droplets dotted along her spine that she was never quite able to reach. 

 

Naturally his body had responded to her as always, and he knew there was no way they were leaving this bathroom without getting intimate.  Fortunately, they still had plenty of time before they were due in the city centre; at the very worst, they’d be fashionably late. 

 

Somehow, quite by accident, they’d ended up facing the mirror, and as soon as he’d seen their joint reflections, seen her gorgeously nude from head to toe, he’d known what he wanted to do.  Briefly he cast his mind back to the time before he’d come to know her intimately; back when she used to dress in layers upon layers of clothing, and he’d wondered why.  And then the first time he’d fully undressed her, she’d been so uncomfortable in her own skin that she’d tried to shield her body from him.  

 

And now here she was, watching him as he touched her, her breathing quickening as he caressed her breasts.  One of her arms went around his neck and she steadied herself against him, staring intently as one of his hands slipped between her thighs.  He flexed his fingers against her mound and she trembled, drawing in a shaky breath as he rotated his fingertips over her sensitive flesh, his other hand still working her breast.

 

Chloe’s head fell back and she whispered his name, urging him to increase the sweet torment.  Her other hand settled over his and she guided him in firm pressing movements that made her moan, made her eyes widen with pleasure as she observed the way he touched her. 

 

Oliver grinned and brushed his lips against the smooth skin of her neck.  For someone who had once been incredibly shy and insecure about her own body, Chloe had come a really, really long way. 

 

“I love touching you,” he whispered hoarsely as he worked his hand lower and thrust two fingers inside her slick warmth, moving in a steady rhythm.  “You feel amazing.” 

 

***

 

She felt incredibly amazing.  Oliver always pleasured her with innate skill, but to actually watch him as he caressed her so intimately was intensely erotic.  His hips ground against her from behind, branding her with steely heat while his tongue trailed slowly up her neck.  She shivered, fiery heat searing her in the places his lips and hands traversed. 

 

Oliver,” she moaned weakly, her legs weakening as she focused her gaze on the movement of his hand, his fingers glistening with her moisture as they moved in and out of her.  So damned hot. 

 

Another rush of tingly heat phased through her and her moans escalated sharply.  Chloe sagged against him, her knees trembling violently as Oliver’s hands continued to pleasure her, driving her higher and higher with firm thrusts.  His thumb pressed hard against her clit and she exploded into a maelstrom of pleasurable sensation, her voice rising in a series of soft cries as her intimate flesh pulsing around his fingers in tight little spasms. 

 

Oliver relaxed his grip on her slightly and lowered her gently to the floor on top of her discarded towel.  He leaned over her, his broad tip nudging her moist flesh from behind.  Chloe rested her weight on her hands and pushed her hips back against him as he slowly pressed forward.  She sighed deeply as he entered her, filling her completely. 

 

“Oh God, yes,” he hissed, grasping her hips and pounding into her with hard thrusts which she readily welcomed.  Chloe moved in counterpoint to his thrusts, lifting her gaze to the mirror to watch him as he made love to her with blissful abandon.  He shifted one hand from her hip and wrapped it around her middle and moved faster, his face awash with pleasure as he exploded within her. 

 

Chloe’s last thought before her second orgasm slammed into her was that she definitely liked to watch.  

 

***

 

“Thirty minutes, my ass,” she murmured weakly as they both lay sated on the bathroom floor. 

 

Oliver grinned and squeezed said ass with affection.  “You know I can never make love to you in a hurry,” he replied.  “You’re like a precious work of art to me; I need time to fully appreciate you.”

 

“Oliver, we have to be somewhere soon,” she reminded him reproachfully. “For a quickie, you took an awfully long time.” 

 

“A slow quickie,” he murmured thoughtfully.  “What do you call that; a Squickie?”

 

She grimaced.  “Ugh.  That doesn’t even sound like fun.” 

 

He paused.  “A Slickie, then?”

 

He heard her sigh deeply.  Insert obligatory eyeroll here, he thought with amusement. 

 

“Does it have to have a name?” she asked dryly. 

 

He shrugged.  “Not really, I’m just stalling for cuddle time.”

 

She gasped.  “Ollie! I should have known!”

 

“You know how grumpy I get when I don’t have my cuddles,” he mumbled, snuggling closer to her as his eyes closed.  “Five minutes, that’s all I ask.” 

 

“Oliver, you’re falling asleep!  We’re not dressed, we need another shower, and don’t even get me started on my hair and make-up!” 

 

“We could always just not go…” he began.

 

“Oh, no you don’t, mister,” she said sternly, scrambling to her feet and tugged on his hand.  “Come on, get up.  Time’s a tickin’.” 

 

“Hey, you don’t even want to go to this thing,” he grumbled.

 

“We have obligations!” she argued, tugging him harder.  “This is for charity, and we need to be responsible.  Come on, honey, get up.  I’ll make it worth your while later…”

 

His eyes snapped open, and he sat up sharply.  “What did you say?” he whispered.

 

Chloe smiled triumphantly.  “Ha!  I knew that would get your attention.”  Quickly she pulled him to his feet.  “Come on – quick shower, and out.  And no funny business this time!” 

 

Oliver grinned widely as they stepped into the cubicle and the water cascaded around them.  It wasn’t Chloe’s offer of sexual favours that had startled him out of his post-orgasmic haze; it was her casual endearment, uttered so naturally he was sure she hadn’t even realised she’d done it. 

 

Honey.  She’d called him Honey.  He liked that.  It was definitely a step in the right direction.

 

***

 

“Penny for them?” she asked him as they sped along towards Metropolis. 

 

He smiled and squeezed her fingers again.  “I was thinking about this afternoon.”

 

She grinned.  “Me too,” she said shyly. 

 

“Oh, really? Elaborate,” he replied with a grin. 

 

She blushed.  “Nothing much; just reflecting on the fact that I am now officially a voyeur, thanks to you.”

 

“Always a pleasure,” he smirked.  “Does that mean I can get the tacky ceiling mirrors installed in our bedroom, now?” 

 

“Oliver Jonas Queen, you are a freak!” she exclaimed, blushing hotly. 

 

Oliver simply laughed and put his arm around her shoulder.  “Yep, I am.  Promise you won’t tell anyone.” 

 

“And if I decide to rat you out?” she challenged.

 

His face lit up in a cheeky grin.  “Then a sex tape will magically surface, and the public will decide for themselves which of us is the bigger freak.   

 

Chloe squeaked in horror.  “Oliver, you didn’t-!”

 

“Course I didn’t,” he said flippantly.  “But you are so easy to wind up.” 

 

“You’re incorrigible,” she grumbled, folding her arms.  

 

“True,” he said, squeezing her shoulder.  “And you wouldn’t have me any other way.”

 

***

 

Chapter 3

 

 

 

 

 



aw you gotta just love these two...

HOT bathroom scenes followed by Ollie wanting cuddles...makes you go kinda goey in side...loved that Ollie picked up Chloe's use of the word Honey...and that in the end Olllie was the one suggesting they not go to the dinner with Chloe insisting they did...mmc

I like that Ollie is bringing Chloe out of her shell and shyness firstly with the whole being comfortable with her body through to introducing her back into the world of the living...

and Clark...he needs a slap round the face with a wet kipper!!! he had his chance he wasnt interested so now should just be a good friend and be happy for her rather than a petulant brat who has had his favourite toy taken away! gggrrrrrrr

Loved it- time to have words with that muse of yours and keep them focused on breakdown :-) your public expects (only teasing Dee)

in time honoured tradition - next chapter please!

aw you gotta just love these two...

"HOT bathroom scenes followed by Ollie wanting cuddles...makes you go kinda goey in side...loved that Ollie picked up Chloe's use of the word Honey...and that in the end Olllie was the one suggesting they not go to the dinner with Chloe insisting they did...mmc"


Glad you approve, Sarah dear! :-D

"I like that Ollie is bringing Chloe out of her shell and shyness firstly with the whole being comfortable with her body through to introducing her back into the world of the living..."

Oliver is so wonderful and patient with her, it's adorable. They're so sweet together! *melts*

"and Clark...he needs a slap round the face with a wet kipper!!! he had his chance he wasnt interested so now should just be a good friend and be happy for her rather than a petulant brat who has had his favourite toy taken away! gggrrrrrrr"

Tough titty for Clark, I say. He had his chance, and he blew it. Now he has to accept the fact that Chloe is over his sorry ass, and move on. :-P

Slap with a wet kipper...Hee!!! :-D

"Loved it- time to have words with that muse of yours and keep them focused on breakdown :-) your public expects (only teasing Dee)"

All finished now, Sarah! At least, this segment is. There's a Part 6 coming soon, fingers crossed! :-P

Thanks for your lovely words, and I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply! *hugs* :-)


PS: I adore your icon. Is is snaggable? :-)

Dee, I have been a bad reviewer lately due to boring obligations, but I love your work, incredible writing here once again.

I've been a bad replier to reviews, Mia. No judgement here!!! ;-)

Take your time, and review when you can. Thanks for all the encouragement! :-D

awesome Dee...loving the Lois....Clark is such a party pooper...lol....ugh....can't wait for more

Happy to put a smile on your face, Stace! *huggles* :-)

"Dirty minds of the world, unite!!! ;-)"

Ohhh may I? Please? LOL.

*Cuddles You*

Absolutely LOVE this awesome new chapter hon!

Course you may, LOL!!! :-D

Glad you like, and thanks for commenting, Jan!

Wow, what a chapter, unfortunatelly myv laptop is gone (i hop not for good), so i havetrouble with make quick reviews...
So ending with mention of tape, hot, interesting and maybe promising?
And what you will update next? I of course vote for Crisis...

"Wow, what a chapter, unfortunatelly myv laptop is gone (i hop not for good), so i havetrouble with make quick reviews..."
Aw, sorry to hear that, babes. Hope you can get it up and running again soon! *hugs*

"So ending with mention of tape, hot, interesting and maybe promising?"
*grins* I'll think about it! ;-)

"And what you will update next? I of course vote for Crisis..."
Yep, Crisis is definitely next. Thanks for your lovely comments, Maddie! :-D

That was amazing!Bathroom scenes were so incredibly hot!
And Ollie wanting cuddles and picking up on the word 'honey'..that was absolutely awesome!So sweet.
I love them when they go to different events!Can't wait!

"That was amazing!Bathroom scenes were so incredibly hot!"

Glad ya like, bebe! ;-)

"And Ollie wanting cuddles and picking up on the word 'honey'..that was absolutely awesome!So sweet."

Chloe's getting there, slowly but surely. Oliver's doing a great job with her, they're perfect for each other. :-)

Thanks for the awesome comments!

I think im dead....Sexy times and then cuddling. we need to clone this guy NOW.
i love how your write them, i just...its so realistic and wonderful and believable. Your amazing.
Brilliant chapter bubbs...awesssome.
Cant wait for more. <3

Chlollie are always fun to write, and their naughty scenes are so awesome because Oliver's so confident and sexy. YUM. :-P

Glad you like it, Kyle! :-)

Oliver likes cuddling,lol this is so cute. The smut part portrays as they're crazy for one another, and are living that connection in a complete way. Very hot.
Chloe is in heaven and at each moment she is becoming aware of it and are loving it. Oliver is a man with a purpose and is reaching at every minute, with each word she lets slip.;)

They are aware of to one another in an incredible way, each detail, from the most intimate moment to the most trivial.:D

I loved Chloe saying "honey", and Oliver saying "our bathroom". They are already living a life together, are definitely a couple.

Chloe's just getting more and more comfortable with Oliver, which is amazing. He's perfect for her. And the little intimacies are just so sweet to write. :-)

Many thanks for your comments, Dani! Hope you enjoy the rest of the story. :-)

Ooooh, these two are just amazing!!

So, now that Chloe is really happy and deeply in love, is when Clark decides to mope for her? For years he moped for Lana when Chloe was always right there. Now she's not his sidekick anymore, though luck you big dumb alien...humf.

This chapter was so hot, sexy and funny!

Amazing job Dee :D

Clark's a silly fool, and he had his chance. Like the BDA that he is, he totally blew it, and now he only has himself to blame.

But enough about that. Glad you like, and thanks for your lovely comments! :-)

I'm sorry, my english is not good enough to tell you how much I love your fics.

It's so wonderful!
Really! I fell in love with "Beauty in the Breakdown".
And this is getting more and more cute.

I love when she calls him "Honey".
Great job!

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

"I'm sorry, my english is not good enough to tell you how much I love your fics."

Your English is AWESOME, and thank you so much for your kind words!!! :-)

"It's so wonderful!
Really! I fell in love with "Beauty in the Breakdown".
And this is getting more and more cute.

I love when she calls him "Honey".
Great job!

Can't wait for the next chapter!!."


I'm so glad you like it! You'll be happy to know that this segment of the Series is now finished, and you have 3 new chapters to read. Hope you enjoy them! :-D


Oliver wants to cuddle and Chloe called him Honey awwwwww.. Steaming hot chapter, I'd want a mirror too if I had Oliver Queen in my bathroom, bed or whatever, that man is HOT beyond words ha ha..

Uhhh and Clark what a dick!! Pardon my French, but last chapter I could write it off as him being his usual BDA around Chloe, but this is just so self centered that I'm GAHHHHH.. But YAY for Lois seeing right through him and setting him straight!

Brilliant chapter as always, you never disappoint hun..;))))

"Oliver wants to cuddle and Chloe called him Honey awwwwww.. Steaming hot chapter, I'd want a mirror too if I had Oliver Queen in my bathroom, bed or whatever, that man is HOT beyond words ha ha.."

Ollie the Cuddler - how awesome is that?!? And I'd have wall-to-wall mirrors if I lived with that man!!! LOL!!

"Uhhh and Clark what a dick!! Pardon my French, but last chapter I could write it off as him being his usual BDA around Chloe, but this is just so self centered that I'm GAHHHHH..!"

He is a silly sausage, and I'm so glad Chloe's over him! :-)

"Brilliant chapter as always, you never disappoint hun..;))))"

So glad you approve, and thanks so much for the fantastic comments, Saurina! :-)

Oh My God...

What an awesome chapter... I'm loving it... yeah i'm totaly in the dirty minds of the world group, and the funny thing is that in my last post in the blog, people was talking about the 'kinks' we can read in chlollie fics, and today we added one more to the list: voyeurism... so, thank you!!!! Our dirty minds thanks a lot...

But i have to say, what really made me go awwwwww was Ollie needing cuddle time... SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dee, u r the best!!!!!!

Thanks for this...

"Oh My God... "

Hee! ;-)

"What an awesome chapter... I'm loving it... yeah i'm totaly in the dirty minds of the world group, and the funny thing is that in my last post in the blog, people was talking about the 'kinks' we can read in chlollie fics, and today we added one more to the list: voyeurism... so, thank you!!!! Our dirty minds thanks a lot..."

We all love a bit of kink, heh. And by the time you're done with the story, you'll be able to add yet another one to the list. Read on to find out which kink it is!!! :-P

"But i have to say, what really made me go awwwwww was Ollie needing cuddle time... SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Isn't he just AWESOME *sigh*

"Dee, u r the best!!!!!!

Thanks for this..."


Always a pleasure, babes. Hope you are well! :-)

pt 1 'cuz you like me chatty

Heeee new chapter woot woot!!!!!!!!!!!

I say it all the time: feedback/comments give us inspiration, and this entire chapter is proof positive of that.

I have this lovely f-lister, purple_moon123; she’s amazing.


Turning all sorts of red!!!!! XDDDDD Love you bb!!!!
So the only way I could respond to such lovely words is this
http://supagirl.tumblr.com/post/4798934733/justin-hartley-as-aquaman-gif-no-3
How long did you stay staring?? And don’t lie!!!

Upon reading the first chapter, she kindly left me three very detailed comments (thanks, bebe!)

Heee I couldn’t shut up and sorry for the epic mini rant in the last comment.

So here it is. For purple_moon123, with lurve from me to you. Dirty minds of the world, unite!!! ;-)

XDDDDD heeee thank you bb!!! * smooches*
And yes Dirty minds that live in the gutter unite!!!!!

Enjoy. Rated NC-17, so no minors here. And if you spot any typo’s, feel free to point them out to me. I edited half asleep.

Ummm do you expect me to notice typos when there's Chlollie smutty times happening??? 'Cause that's just CRAZY talk!!!

“Wow,” Lois breathed as she watched from the window as the sleek car shoot off down the street. “Chloe and Oliver…how did I miss that? Six weeks, and I didn’t even have a clue!”

Yeah, wow!!! Where'd be the Chlollie smutty times??? Sorry I have only one train of thought at the moment!!

“Yeah, she certainly kept that pretty quiet,” Clark grumbled as he dropped the curtain and went back into the room. “Oliver Queen, of all people…”

Can you sound anymore douchetastic, Clark??? You probably will!!

“I had no idea they were even close!” Lois said in amazement, folding her arms. “I mean, I know they must have interacted in social circles once or twice because of mutual acquaintances like me or your Mom – but when did they even become friends? When did they start seeing each other on a basis regular enough to even…?” she laughed and shook her head. “I still can’t get my head around it!”

Yeah, 'cause she knows everything that's going around her. *rolls eyes* Sorry but I told you I have this aversion to SVClois!!

“Me neither,” Clark replied sourly. “Didn’t take her long to move on, did it?”

Really Clark?? Really??? Ohhh right Chloe is forever to stay mourning the jerk-off that told her that she was the worst mistake of his life, called her every bad name under the sun, stole from her and etc... I mean how dare she move on with her life!!!

Lois frowned. “That’s not fair, Clark. She and Jimmy had broken up long before he died, and even that was almost a year ago now.”

WTH Lois the voice a reason!!! Will wonders never end!!!

Clark blinked. “Jimmy?”

She shrugged. “Who else would you be talking about?”

Clark opened his mouth to reply but stayed silent, a ruddy flush staining his cheeks. Lois’s eyes widened as realisation dawned.


Seriously Clark??? Ohhh so she's supposed to forever be your backpocket girl. Only there for you. Only sacrificing her life for you. Always putting her life on hold for you!!! A-hole!!!

“Clark…you and Chloe were never like that,” she said softly. “You never shared her feelings. It’s selfish of you to think she’d quietly carry a torch for you forever.”

More points for Lois. It's not only selfish but so beyond douchetastic!!!

“Hey, I never said it was me,” he said defensively.

Lois stared hard at him for a long time before giving him a sad smile. “No; but you didn’t have to.”


Took the words right out of my mouth!!! I'll add a couple more: fucking asshole of epic douchy proportions!!!!

The smooth purr of the Ferarri’s engine was comfortably soothing. Chloe and Oliver sat in comfortable silence as he drove them swiftly but safely back towards Metropolis, his focus on the road ahead.

IT'S CHLOLLIE SMUTTY TIME!!!!! XDDDDDD

Re: pt 1 'cuz you like me chatty

"Heeee new chapter woot woot!!!!!!!!!!!"

It's Purple Moon Review Time!!! And I definitely like you chatty, babes. ;-)

"Turning all sorts of red!!!!! XDDDDD Love you bb!!!!"

Love you too, babes! You're awesome. :-)

"So the only way I could respond to such lovely words is this
http://supagirl.tumblr.com/post/4798934733/justin-hartley-as-aquaman-gif-no-3
How long did you stay staring?? And don’t lie!!!"


seven and-a-half minutes *iz sheepish*

...okay, EIGHT. ;-)

"Heee I couldn’t shut up and sorry for the epic mini rant in the last comment."

I absolutely ADORED the Epic Mini Rant. Epic Mini Rants FTW!!! I'm still giggling about your deferrment to your Default Spanish setting!!! :-D

"XDDDDD heeee thank you bb!!! * smooches*
And yes Dirty minds that live in the gutter unite!!!!!"


Yes, yes, come one, come all!!! (not literally!!!)

"Ummm do you expect me to notice typos when there's Chlollie smutty times happening??? 'Cause that's just CRAZY talk!!!"

Oh, that's a relief!!! :-)

"Yeah, wow!!! Where'd be the Chlollie smutty times??? Sorry I have only one train of thought at the moment!!"

It's on the way, Sweetie! :-)

"Can you sound anymore douchetastic, Clark??? You probably will!!"

You know him well! :-D

"Yeah, 'cause she knows everything that's going around her. *rolls eyes* Sorry but I told you I have this aversion to SVClois!!"

*giggles* She means well. Unlike that BDA she's talking to...*growls*

"Really Clark?? Really??? Ohhh right Chloe is forever to stay mourning the jerk-off that told her that she was the worst mistake of his life, called her every bad name under the sun, stole from her and etc... I mean how dare she move on with her life!!!"

Douchebag with a Capital D!!!

"WTH Lois the voice a reason!!! Will wonders never end!!! "

Well, she can be nice. Occasionally. ;-)

"Seriously Clark??? Ohhh so she's supposed to forever be your backpocket girl. Only there for you. Only sacrificing her life for you. Always putting her life on hold for you!!! A-hole!!!"

He needs a kick in the nuts with a kryptonite boot. Darned BDA...

"More points for Lois. It's not only selfish but so beyond douchetastic!!!"

Clark just need to keep his lips zipped. He suffers from a severe case of Foot-in-Mouth Disease!!! :-P

"Took the words right out of my mouth!!! I'll add a couple more: fucking asshole of epic douchy proportions!!!!"

Go, Purple Moon, GO!!! :-)

"IT'S CHLOLLIE SMUTTY TIME!!!!! XDDDDDD "

Yeah, baby, YEAH!!! :-D

I'll have to continue tomorrow, it's my bedtime. But thanks so much for your incredibly awesome uber-reviews, and I'm sorry I'm so late to reply to them!!! :-)

*Huggles*

pt 2 'cuz you like me chatty

Chloe gazed at him from behind her shades, thanking her lucky stars that such a wonderful man found his way to her at the perfect time. Sensing her eyes on him he glanced over and raised his brow in silent query. She smiled, a large reassuring grin, and rested one hand on his thigh. Oliver returned her smile and placed his hand on top of hers, giving her fingers a quick but firm squeeze.

Ohhhh car sex??? sorry I have smut on the brain and quiet frankly it's your fault!!

She stared down at his hand and felt her cheeks grow warm. Ah, those hands. The things he could do with those hands…

What??? More details, please and the more explicit the better!!! XDDDD

“It’s just a gathering of people with deep pockets who want to do a little something for charity,” he said patiently. “That’s all. And I don’t know why you’re so apprehensive about this; you’ve taken down criminals and battled aliens without so much as batting an eyelid. All we’re going to do is smile and chow down a very expensive dinner.”

It's kinda funny seeing Chloe being worried about not fitting in or doing something wrong and just love Oliver reassuring her that she’ll do just fine!!!!!!!!!

In the midst of her wandering thoughts, she felt Oliver’s unmistakeable touch; a single finger, trailing slowly down the centre of her spine till he got to the small of her back.

*gulp* That’s is so freaking hot!!!! Seriously there’s like tingly sensations all over!!!!

“You missed a spot,” he said, his voice low and gravelly with desire. “You towel down like a drill sergeant every single day, but you always…miss…that…spot.”

So I love, love that he pays attention, well probably perving on her as she towels dry!!!

A smile played at the corners of her mouth as his hands held her hips in a gentle yet firm grasp and pulled her up against him, her back against his front. Already she could feel the evidence of his desire pressing against her backside, and she leaned her hips back against his towelled waist, pressing against his thickening length.

*blinks* Unf That is seriously so freaking hot!!!! Why oh didn’t we ever get a scene like this!!! It would of melted t.v. & computer screens across the world.

“We need to be at Curbishley Hall in exactly three and a half hours,” she murmured, watching their reflections in the full-length mirror as his hand crept over her stomach.

Seriously, Dee you’re killing me here!!! All this imagery is so sjdfjlk lkjfklhsfh kfhlksfienie lsjf

To her surprise, he held her fast where she was. “No; like this,” he said softly, his dark eyes glinting appreciatively as he studied her naked form in the mirror.

*thud* Yeah that was the sound of me passing out from the hotness!!!

“I want you to see what I see, Chloe,” he whispered against her ear, making her shudder.

Not only Chloe shudder but the entire fangirls weep that we don’t have one of him!!!!

He hadn’t planned on making love to her until later on in the evening. He really hadn’t. But just as he was finishing up his shave, she’d stepped out of the shower and proceeded dry to herself off…and sure enough, there it was. That line of droplets dotted along her spine that she was never quite able to reach.

I all ready told you that I loved that he paid attention (well perved) on Chloe!! So I’ll just say it again!!!

Somehow, quite by accident, they’d ended up facing the mirror, and as soon as he’d seen their joint reflections, seen her gorgeously nude from head to toe, he’d known what he wanted to do.

Suuuuuurre by accident!! Uh huh!!! But who cares you’re naked and Chloe’s naked… you know what I’m getting at!!

Re: pt 2 'cuz you like me chatty

"Ohhhh car sex??? sorry I have smut on the brain and quiet frankly it's your fault!!"

Oh, sure. Blame me!!! :-P

What??? More details, please and the more explicit the better!!! XDDDD"

Your wish is my command, O Purple Moon! :-)

"It's kinda funny seeing Chloe being worried about not fitting in or doing something wrong and just love Oliver reassuring her that she’ll do just fine!!!!!!!!!"

Well, she's been holed up in her Ivory Tower for a long time. It's been a while since she was around normal people, you see. :-)

"*gulp* That’s is so freaking hot!!!! Seriously there’s like tingly sensations all over!!!!"

Oliver's badass. He makes even the simplest of touches HAWT. *fans self*

"So I love, love that he pays attention, well probably perving on her as she towels dry!!!"

With a bod like Chloe's at his disposal, I'm sure he's more than happy to be a perv! :-P

"*blinks* Unf That is seriously so freaking hot!!!! Why oh didn’t we ever get a scene like this!!! It would of melted t.v. & computer screens across the world."

And that's exactly why we didn't get it. It would have made Cnois sex look like Bridge on Sunday at the old people's home. :-)

"Seriously, Dee you’re killing me here!!! All this imagery is so sjdfjlk lkjfklhsfh kfhlksfienie lsjf"

Ooh, I love it when you go all incoherent!!! LOL!!! :-D

"*thud* Yeah that was the sound of me passing out from the hotness!!!"

Here you go, babes *hands you smelling salts* Now get right up, and enjoy the rest of the show!!! :-P

"Not only Chloe shudder but the entire fangirls weep that we don’t have one of him!!!!"

Every woman deserves to have her own Oliver Queen. Simple Fact. :-)

"I all ready told you that I loved that he paid attention (well perved) on Chloe!! So I’ll just say it again!!!"

Unlike some BDAs I won't mention, Oliver Queen knows a sexy-ass woman when he sees one! ;-)

"Suuuuuurre by accident!! Uh huh!!! But who cares you’re naked and Chloe’s naked… you know what I’m getting at!!"

Course I do. Let the sexxorz begin!!! :-P

Thanks for another fantabulous review, Purple Moon! Much, much, MUCH appreciated. *hugs* :-)

pt 3 'cuz you like me chatty

Briefly he cast his mind back to the time before he’d come to know her intimately; back when she used to dress in layers upon layers of clothing, and he’d wondered why. And then the first time he’d fully undressed her, she’d been so uncomfortable in her own skin that she’d tried to shield her body from him.

It will forever piss me off that SV pretended that Chloe/AM wasn’t sexy or desirable and pushed her to the side!!!

And now here she was, watching him as he touched her, her breathing quickening as he caressed her breasts. One of her arms went around his neck and she steadied herself against him, staring intently as one of his hands slipped between her thighs. He flexed his fingers against her mound and she trembled, drawing in a shaky breath as he rotated his fingertips over her sensitive flesh, his other hand still working her breast.

Chloe’s head fell back and she whispered his name, urging him to increase the sweet torment. Her other hand settled over his and she guided him in firm pressing movements that made her moan, made her eyes widen with pleasure as she observed the way he touched her.


O_O So apparently I have a kink for voyeurish things!!! ‘Cause seriously that is freaking hot!!!!

She felt incredibly amazing. Oliver always pleasured her with innate skill, but to actually watch him as he caressed her so intimately was intensely erotic. His hips ground against her from behind, branding her with steely heat while his tongue trailed slowly up her neck. She shivered, fiery heat searing her in the places his lips and hands traversed.

Yep, it’s now been added to the kink list!!! Yowza, Dee you’re killing me!!!

“Oliver,” she moaned weakly, her legs weakening as she focused her gaze on the movement of his hand, his fingers glistening with her moisture as they moved in and out of her. So damned hot.

That’s what I’ve been saying non stop!!! Freaking hot!!!!

Chloe’s last thought before her second orgasm slammed into her was that she definitely liked to watch.

Who knew, right???? I sure didn’t and here I am innocently reading a smutty fic and bam I come to the realization that you like the whole: him watching her as she watches him as he watches her!! *eyes glaze over* ;-)

Re: pt 3 'cuz you like me chatty

"It will forever piss me off that SV pretended that Chloe/AM wasn’t sexy or desirable and pushed her to the side!!!"

Well, their bloody loss. They'll never know just how many viewers they lost by not capitalising on the Sexiness of The Mack when they had her at their beck and call!

"O_O So apparently I have a kink for voyeurish things!!! ‘Cause seriously that is freaking hot!!!!"

Heh heh! Embrace the Kinky Voyeur in you, PM. Embrace it! Give her a name!!! :-P

"Yep, it’s now been added to the kink list!!! Yowza, Dee you’re killing me!!!"

Glad you like, and please don't die just yet, LOL!!! :-D

"That’s what I’ve been saying non stop!!! Freaking hot!!!!"

Sizzlin'! ;-)

"Who knew, right???? I sure didn’t and here I am innocently reading a smutty fic and bam I come to the realization that you like the whole: him watching her as she watches him as he watches her!! *eyes glaze over* ;-)"

Kinky Voyeurs FTW!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL!!! :-D

Thanks so much for your lovely reviews, PM!!! I appreciate it so much. :-)