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Chlollie Fanfic: Beauty in the Breakdown V - Feeling Good

I go where the Muses take me, and today, the wind is blowing in the Chlollie direction. Whee! :-D

 

First chapter of the Fifth installment in the Beauty in the Breakdown Series, titled Feeling Good.  I hope you like it! 

 

NB: Three chapters tops.  Please don’t laugh at me if once again, I’m unable to stick to projected fic lengths. :-/

 

Enjoy!  Awesome banner by the lovely jennyspring. Thanks so much for letting me grace my fic with your talent!

 

 

 

Title:              Beauty in the Breakdown V – Feeling Good

Author:          BabyDee
Pairing:          Chlollie

Rating:           NC-17 (this chapter PG-13)

Warnings:     An expansion of Chlollie post-Warrior

Timeline:      Season 9

Disclaimer:   All characters belong to the CW & DC comics. 

Summary:     Chloe’s confidence begins to soar as her relationship with Oliver goes public.

Feedback:      …bring it, bebe. J

 

As always, written for sxymami0909, based on my favourite song on the Chlollie playlist she sent me.  Thank you, Cori – you’ve helped create a very beautiful monster here. J

 

Previous stories in the Series:

 

Beauty in the Breakdown I: Letting Go

Beauty in the Breakdown II: Taking Hold

Beauty in the Breakdown III: Reaching Out

Beauty in the Breakdown IV: Falling In

 

 

Beauty in the Breakdown V: Feeling Good, Chapter 1...Collapse )




"Just that we've been dating for five weeks, and banging each other's brains out for six."

"Cool."

Abso-fucking-lutely amazing.

Glad you approve, m'dear! :-D

Edited at 2011-05-02 12:27 am (UTC)

pt 1 'cuz I talk too much

Woot, woot!!! Chlollie goodness from the awesome Dee!!!!!

NB: Three chapters tops.
XD Sure I believe you!!!! *coughs snickers coughs*
*mumbles three chapters* *still coughing snickering coughing*

Please don’t laugh at me if once again, I’m unable to stick to projected fic lengths.
Laugh???? Why would I laugh???? I highly support this becoming lengthy, 10 chapters, 15 whatevs. I'm so not laughing maybe cackling but not laughing!!!

He took her face in his hands and stroked her cheek with his thumb. “Chloe, you’re beautiful with or without make-up, you know that,” he insisted.
*sighs* this man... sheer perfection!!!

“Yeah, and who’s fault is that, huh?” she replied with a sneaky wink. Oliver had the good grace to look a tiny bit guilty at having…distracted her…as she was getting ready for the charity ball.
Ummm where be this distraction scene??? I need it like NOW!!!

Chloe grinned and ran barefoot into the Talon, picking up her dress and taking the steps two-by-two up to the apartment that she shared with her cousin Lois.
I just love seeing this care-free-playful side of Chloe, which we rarely got to see!!!! But then who wouldn't be care free after having lots of amazing sex with Ollie. XDDDD

Quickly she threw the door open, startling said cousin and Clark who were arm-in-arm on the couch, watching TV.
Bleh!!! Sorry I just have this aversion to SVClois that it makes me heave on sight!!!!

“Chloe, where have you been?” Lois asked, rising to her feet.
Fucking Oliver non stop!!!!!! and you?? Oh right I don't give a fuck please more Chlollie goodness!!! See, I even asked nicely. ;D

“I haven’t seen you in two whole days!”
yeah, baby!!! So in my head Chlollie has been doing it for two days straight!!! Wut??? I'm a perv that happily lives in the gutter!!! *shrugs*

Besides, she thought smugly, Oliver somehow always managed to persuade her to stay over with him in Metropolis with the most…compelling…of arguments.
Now that's what I'm talking about!!!!!! XDDDDDDD And pray tell what would this compelling arguments be!!! Dirty minds want to know!!!!!

“Not so fast, missy,” Lois drawled sternly, halting her with an outstretched hand on the shoulder as she stared at her through narrowed eyes. “There’s something…different…about you…”
Well she has been having back-breaking-twisting-pretzel-monkey-sex with the gorgeousness that is Oliver!!! XDDDD

“Omigod, you had sex!” Lois screeched, pointing at her with widened eyes.

“What?” boomed Clark from the couch, adding voice to the conversation for the first time.

Reminds me of Phoebe from Friends when Monica and Chandler came back from London!!
Really Clark. You can't possibly sound more like a douche!!!

Continued in pt 2 because I talk WAY too MUCH!!!! XDDD

Re: pt 1 'cuz I talk too much

YAAAAAAY, three hearty comments to sink my teeth into!!!

You know I love your loquacious comments, purple moon. Don't ever shorten them. :-)

Be back to comment on each of them shortly!!! :-D

*huggles*

...aaaaaand I'm back!

"Woot, woot!!! Chlollie goodness from the awesome Dee!!!!!"
I can't stay away, babes. The Power of Chlollie compels me! :-P

"XD Sure I believe you!!!! *coughs snickers coughs*
*mumbles three chapters* *still coughing snickering coughing*"

What? I'm serious!! Don't y'all believe me??? *lower lip trembles* :-/

"Laugh???? Why would I laugh???? I highly support this becoming lengthy, 10 chapters, 15 whatevs. I'm so not laughing maybe cackling but not laughing!!!"
Oh, cackle away, my sweet. As long as y'all enjoy it, I don't got a problem with it! :-D

"*sighs* this man... sheer perfection!!!"
Beautiful inside, beautiful out. :-)

"Ummm where be this distraction scene??? I need it like NOW!!!"
Okay, since you asked, I'll probably write it as a oneshot companion piece. Happy now? :-D

"I just love seeing this care-free-playful side of Chloe, which we rarely got to see!!!! But then who wouldn't be care free after having lots of amazing sex with Ollie. XDDDD"
I know, it's enough to change one's entire outlook on life! :-D

"Bleh!!! Sorry I just have this aversion to SVClois that it makes me heave on sight!!!!"
Me too, babes, but I find that they are a necessary evil. Besides, compare and contrast: What have they both been doing all afternoon?
Chlollie = Wild, Crazy Spontaneous Sex.
Clois = Watching TV. *Nwah nwah nwah...!* :-P

"Fucking Oliver non stop!!!!!! and you?? Oh right I don't give a fuck please more Chlollie goodness!!! See, I even asked nicely. ;D"
Don't worry, you'll get it! No, not you personally, but...eh, you know what I mean! :-D

"yeah, baby!!! So in my head Chlollie has been doing it for two days straight!!! Wut??? I'm a perv that happily lives in the gutter!!! *shrugs*"
Any room for one more in that gutter of yours? Scooch over, bebe! *settles down with a bottle of bubbly and some popcorn*

"Now that's what I'm talking about!!!!!! XDDDDDDD And pray tell what would this compelling arguments be!!! Dirty minds want to know!!!!!"
You'll get it, you'll get it!!! Calm yourself, woman!!! :-D

"Well she has been having back-breaking-twisting-pretzel-monkey-sex with the gorgeousness that is Oliver!!! XDDDD"
Yeah, that'll definitely make a change on one's person! :-P

"Reminds me of Phoebe from Friends when Monica and Chandler came back from London!!"
Oh, yes, I remember that!!!

PHOEBE: *to Joey* You ate MEAT!!! *to Monica* You had SEX!!! Classic GOLD. Loved it! :-D

"Really Clark. You can't possibly sound more like a douche!!!"
Oh, yes he can. Trust me. *seethes*

"Continued in pt 2 because I talk WAY too MUCH!!!! XDDD"
I don't got a problem with it! :-D

Many thanks for the lovely review, my sweet!!!



Edited at 2011-04-02 07:08 pm (UTC)

pt 2 'cuz I talk too much

Lois ignored him and grinned at Chloe eagerly. “Admit it. You’ve been doing the dirty all afternoon, haven’t you?”
Yes that'd be the best, ignore the douche and lets focus and Chloe's sex life!!!

“Don’t be silly Lois, of course she hasn’t,” Clark said almost crossly. “I mean, she’s not seeing anyone, and-”
Ughhh!!! Oh look I was mistaken, Clark the douche!!! Just because you don't know Chloe's in's and out's, well who's been going in and out of her, doesn't mean you know everything, you freaking douche!!

“…and if she were, it certainly wouldn’t reflect on-”
So if you don't know about sex glow or seen it doesn't mean it's not true, douche!!!

“Okay, yes!” she admitted, cutting Clark off mid-stream. “I had toe-curling, mind-blowing, scintillating sex about…” she glanced at her watch again “…ninety minutes ago. Now, if you don’t mind-”
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD Tell me more!!!!!!!!!! XDDDD

“Oh, nooooooo. No way are you leaving it there, babe. Nuh-uh!” Lois exclaimed, turning the latch on the door and standing with her back against it. “Details, girl. Details!”

Clark interjected from the couch. “Lois, surely we don’t need to know all about that-”

Umm, Clark STFU and yes we do need to know EVERYTHING!!!! The more graphic the details the better!!!! XDDD

“Oliver Queen.”

“Oliver QUEEN??” yelled Clark.

“OLIVER QUEEN?!?” Lois shrieked, her eyes popping open. “My Oliver Queen?”

Yeah, Oliver!!! And ummm *rolls eyes* no beyotch he is Chloe's Oliver. Thank you very much!!!

Chloe sighed and rolled her eyes. “Come on, Lois. He hasn’t been your Oliver Queen for quite a while now.”
See just what I said!!! Maybe it's less bitchy but the same point!!!

“Because you never asked! Now I really need to go, or we’ll be late!” she cried, exasperated.
Heee *cackle* And quite frankly, none of your business!!!

“In a second!” she yelled down, blowing a kiss at him. That seemed to mollify him some, because he returned her grin and eased off the accelerator. Slightly.
See, I just love this playful side of Chloe!!!! So adorable!!!

She heard a movement behind her as Clark leaned out the window and stared over her shoulder. “Jesus, you weren’t kidding,” he said breathlessly.
Ughhhh douche is still around!!! Why would Chloe lie about who she is fucking?? Really hate this douche!!!

Lois joined them at the window and stuck her head out. “My goodness, it’s true,” she gasped. “That’s Oliver’s car!”
*rolls eyes* Seriously why would she LIE about FUCKING Oliver?? Douches, the both of them!!!

“Yes, and as you can see, he’s barely keeping the gas pedal contained!” Chloe said crossly.
I don't know how Chloe contained herself. I would of stormed out and told them to go fuck themselves and fucked Oliver right there in the car. But I'm a petty, mean bitch!! *shrugs*

Oliver’s brows rose as he surveyed the trio of heads above. Never one to disappoint an audience, he deftly unbuttoned his shirt and opened it wide, baring his chest as he winked up at them lasciviously.
*sigh* thank goodness for Oliver!!!!
Now, take it all off, baby!!!!!!!!!!!

“Ugh!” groaned Clark, covering his eyes.
That's what I say when I see your douchy ass on my t.v. and computer screen!!

Instead she was greeted with a smile. “I’m happy for you, Chloe,” her cousin said with genuine warmth. “Oliver’s a nice guy, he’ll treat you well.”
hmm I guess I can forgive her!!!

continued in pt 3 'cuz apparetnly I can't STFU!!! Heee

Re: pt 2 'cuz I talk too much

"Yes that'd be the best, ignore the douche and lets focus and Chloe's sex life!!!"
It'll certainly be a more interesting conversation! :-)

"Ughhh!!! Oh look I was mistaken, Clark the douche!!! Just because you don't know Chloe's in's and out's, well who's been going in and out of her, doesn't mean you know everything, you freaking douche!!"
Oh, you naughty girl, you! Ha ha!!! :-D

"So if you don't know about sex glow or seen it doesn't mean it's not true, douche!!!"
Hee! Poor Clark. He's only ever had sex with Blahna, you see, so you can't blame him for being completely ignorant and unaware of the concept of The Glow. ;-)

"XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD Tell me more!!!!!!!!!! XDDDD"
Oh, I will - in Chapter 2. Just for you, bebe!!! :-P

"Umm, Clark STFU and yes we do need to know EVERYTHING!!!! The more graphic the details the better!!!! XDDD"
...And may he be plagued with dreams of hot, sweaty Chlollie Sex forever and ever, Amen! :-P

"Yeah, Oliver!!! And ummm *rolls eyes* no beyotch he is Chloe's Oliver. Thank you very much!!!"
Too right! :-)

"See just what I said!!! Maybe it's less bitchy but the same point!!!"
Trufax, honey!

"Heee *cackle* And quite frankly, none of your business!!!"
What is it about Lois needing to hear every detail of her cousin's lovelife? It must be because the poor girl ain't gettin' none herself. ;-)

"See, I just love this playful side of Chloe!!!! So adorable!!!"
Shagging Oliver Queen is definitely beneficial to her health!!! :-D

"Ughhhh douche is still around!!! Why would Chloe lie about who she is fucking?? Really hate this douche!!!"
Clark simply can't get his head around the idea of Chloe, Oliver and Sex in the same sentence. ;-)

"*rolls eyes* Seriously why would she LIE about FUCKING Oliver?? Douches, the both of them!!!"
Maybe she should shag Oliver in front of them to prove it!!! :-P

"I don't know how Chloe contained herself. I would of stormed out and told them to go fuck themselves and fucked Oliver right there in the car. But I'm a petty, mean bitch!! *shrugs*"
Chlollie nookie in the car I'm down with. Unfortunately, Clark and Lois cannot do likewise because Clark
(a) does not have a sexy car, and
(b) is a terrified pansy.

*sigh* thank goodness for Oliver!!!!
Now, take it all off, baby!!!!!!!!!!!"

I wish! really wish!!! *slurp* :-P

"That's what I say when I see your douchy ass on my t.v. and computer screen!!"
Oh, SNAP! :-D

"hmm I guess I can forgive her!!!"
Yeah, I guess she's aight. For now. ;-)

Awesome review, Purple Moon. Can't wait to sink my teeth into the next one! :-D


pt 3 'cuz I talk too much

“Yeah, who’d have thought it?” Clark drawled from the window, his tone decidedly frosty. “You, pulling Oliver Queen? Didn’t know you had it in you.”
EHHH, WHAT!!!
*blinks*
*
**
***
*takes a deep breathe*
****
Warning!!!
If you're offended by cussing skip ahead!!! Also major abuse of caps!lock!!!
*
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You've been warned!!!!!!

FUCKING MOTHER FUCKER!!!! SERIOUSLY!!!! YOU FUCKING ASSHOLE!!!!!!!!!!!!! JUST BECAUSE YOU'VE BEEN TO BLIND AND A FUCKING COWARD WHEN IT COMES TO CHLOE DOESN'T MEAN OTHERS ARE LIKE YOU!!!!! ESTE PINCHE PERRO!!!!!! IDIOTA!!! QUIEN TE CREES QUE ERES???!!! PERRO!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE TELL ME CHLOE TAKES OUT SOMETHING MADE OF KRYPTONITE TO BEAT THE EVER LOVING SHIT OUT OF HIM!!!!!!

Chloe’s brows went up in surprise at the thinly veiled insult. Oh, no he didn’t.
OH YES HE DID!!!!!!!!!!!!! YES HE DID!!!!!!!!!! KICK HIS ASSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KICK HIS ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

“Oh, I’ve had it in me several times now,” she replied smoothly. “And I’m pretty sure I’ve pulled it fairly often, too.”
;D That's my girl!!! Now strap on your boots made of Kryptonite and give him swift kick to the huevos!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Clark’s jaw hit the floor as he was stunned into silence. From behind her Lois snickered loudly at his obvious discomfort.
PUDRETE!! PUDRETE!!! GRANDISIMO IDIOTA!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ha, Chloe thought triumphantly. Swallow that, you big douche.
I say you give him more graphic details on how Oliver SEDUCED you!!!!!

“Better go now,” she said softly. “You don’t wanna keep your man waiting.”
Especially for this freaking douche!!!

Clark was still staring at her with his mouth still wide open. She grinned and wiggled her fingers at him in a saucy little wave. “Toodles.”
I seriously don't know how Chloe managed to contain herself!!!! Freaking asshole!!!

She spun round, opened the door and sped down the stairs, feeling equal parts amused and annoyed. Where the hell did Clark get off, insinuating that she could never get or hold the attention of someone like Oliver Queen?
asshole. douche. asshole. douche. asshole. douche.

Her rage had cooled considerably by the time she stepped into the purring car, where a not-so-jolly Ollie was pointedly staring at his watch.
Heeeeeeeeeeeee Oliver sight for soar eyes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She smoothed her dress down and settled comfortably into her seat. “Just that we’ve been dating for five weeks, and banging each other’s brains out for six,” she said matter-of-factly, pushing on a pair of oversized shades.

Oliver grinned, a satisfied smile lifting his lips as he threw the vehicle into gear. “Cool.”

Heeee Chloe wins at life!!! And love Oliver to pieces!!!!!

Great chapter, Dee!!!!! Loved it!!!
Wondering if Chloe is going to tell Oliver about Clark's stupid remarks and most importantly will there be car sex??? Wut??? Like I've said I'd be a perv!!!!!!
And sorry for the cussing but ugh the douche just makes me rage!!!! I hate him so much that my mind blanks out and can only think in Spanish cuss words!!!

EPIC RANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-D

"EHHH, WHAT!!!
*blinks*
*
**
***"

Uh-oh...

"*takes a deep breathe*
****
Warning!!!
If you're offended by cussing skip ahead!!! Also major abuse of caps!lock!!!
*
**
You've been warned!!!!!!"

Oh, now you've done it, Clark. Now you've done it!!! *hides behind chair and grabs popcorn*

"FUCKING MOTHER FUCKER!!!! SERIOUSLY!!!! YOU FUCKING ASSHOLE!!!!!!!!!!!!! JUST BECAUSE YOU'VE BEEN TO BLIND AND A FUCKING COWARD WHEN IT COMES TO CHLOE DOESN'T MEAN OTHERS ARE LIKE YOU!!!!! ESTE PINCHE PERRO!!!!!! IDIOTA!!! QUIEN TE CREES QUE ERES???!!! PERRO!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE TELL ME CHLOE TAKES OUT SOMETHING MADE OF KRYPTONITE TO BEAT THE EVER LOVING SHIT OUT OF HIM!!!!!!"


EPIC RANT!!! I love it!!! Awesome how you slipped into Spanish and cussed his ass! I don't even know what it all means, but it's bloody good. The fool deserved it. Purple_Moon for President!!! :-D

"OH YES HE DID!!!!!!!!!!!!! YES HE DID!!!!!!!!!! KICK HIS ASSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KICK HIS ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
*wheezes* Can't. Stop. Laughing! :-D

";D That's my girl!!! Now strap on your boots made of Kryptonite and give him swift kick to the huevos!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Chloe's got far too much class for that, more's the pity. :-(

"PUDRETE!! PUDRETE!!! GRANDISIMO IDIOTA!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Mucho Grandisimo! :-D

"I say you give him more graphic details on how Oliver SEDUCED you!!!!!"
*chants* Make Him Squirm!!! Make Him Squirm!!! :-D

"I seriously don't know how Chloe managed to contain herself!!!! Freaking asshole!!!"
She had Oliver waiting in the car, that's how. Girl's sorted her priorities out, and Clark ain't one of 'em! :-P

"asshole. douche. asshole. douche. asshole. douche."
Interchange at will. Occasionally throw in a 'BDA' to mix things up a little. ;-)

"Heeeeeeeeeeeee Oliver sight for soar eyes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
It's so good to see him!

"Heeee Chloe wins at life!!! And love Oliver to pieces!!!!!"
I seriously need that on an icon! :-)

"Great chapter, Dee!!!!! Loved it!!!"
Aw, thanks for the lurve, hun. Your reviews are totally made of WIN, and your EPIC RANT is EPIC!!! :-D

*huggles*


Edited at 2011-04-22 03:31 pm (UTC)

Chloe and Oliver arguing because the makeup was great. lol

Lois noticing the sex glow is great fun and now it was a surprise for her, Clark is as always without words, he takes a while to understand and when understand he takes time to accept. LOL But Lois insisted so much that got what she wanted, and she and Clark also won a small show of Oliver. LOL

I loved Chloe telling the straight truth and Oliver enjoying everything. They're perfect one for another. : D

Great updated. :)

"Chloe and Oliver arguing because the makeup was great. lol"
The best part of arguing is the great make-up sex. Trufax. ;-)

"I loved Chloe telling the straight truth and Oliver enjoying everything. They're perfect one for another. : D"
They really are, aren't they? And Clark is just an idiot.

Glad you like, Dani! :-D

As always another amazing chapter...

i'm so excited to see Chloe in this new light... feeling all the confidence she deserves... And Oliver is always amazing... i can really see him opening his shirt and winking at them... lol

And Oh My God, Clark... it's a lost cause... let's give up on him...

Dee, i'm counting minutes (not pressure here :D) to read the next part..

You're an amazing writer, and i LOVE this story... :DDD

Thanks for sharing your talent with us...


"As always another amazing chapter..."
Thanks, my dear! :-)

"i'm so excited to see Chloe in this new light... feeling all the confidence she deserves... And Oliver is always amazing... i can really see him opening his shirt and winking at them... lol"
Oliver's naughty, isn't he? And I love that he's instilled Chloe with such confidence. :-)

"And Oh My God, Clark... it's a lost cause... let's give up on him..."
You mean you haven't given up on him already?!? LOL!!! :-D

"You're an amazing writer, and i LOVE this story... :DDD"
Aw, thanks, hun! Always happy to read your comments. :-)

"Thanks for sharing your talent with us..."
It's a pleasure, babes. :-)


Now Dee I owe you an apology I did read when you first posted but havent had time to comment I meant to go back and paste one up but having seen the second chapter go up wondered if I had ever done that...which I obviously didn't :( ok grovelling over...

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! your muse got back on track with breakdown....*lots of clapping*

Great Chapter...really enjoyed the Clois interaction and Lois getting within a foot of Chloe realising she had a sex glow - lol

I loved her put down of Clark her response to him was one of the best comebacks “Oh, I’ve had it in me several times now,” she replied smoothly. “And I’m pretty sure I’ve pulled it fairly often, too.” - LMAO top response Dee :-)

Fantastic job as always Dee! Right cant stop off to read Chapter 2 - see you there x

PS got to say epic rant by purplemoon on her part 2 mmc the constant reverting to spanish...lol



Edited at 2011-04-21 07:17 am (UTC)

"Now Dee I owe you an apology I did read when you first posted but havent had time to comment I meant to go back and paste one up but having seen the second chapter go up wondered if I had ever done that...which I obviously didn't :( ok grovelling over..."
Aw, Sarah! You know I don't mind however long it takes, just as long as you read it and you like it! :-D

"YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! your muse got back on track with breakdown....*lots of clapping*"
This series has even me hooked, and I'm writing it!!! :-D

"Great Chapter...really enjoyed the Clois interaction and Lois getting within a foot of Chloe realising she had a sex glow - lol"
Regular Hawt Sexxorz with Oliver Jonas Queen will do that to a person. ;-)

"I loved her put down of Clark her response to him was one of the best comebacks...LMAO top response Dee :-)"
Clark definitely deserved to be put in his place for that comment. Silly BDA!!!

"Fantastic job as always Dee! Right cant stop off to read Chapter 2 - see you there x"
Have fun, hun! *waves* :-)


PS got to say epic rant by purplemoon on her part 2 mmc the constant reverting to spanish...lol


OMG, this made my day:

“You, pulling Oliver Queen? Didn’t know you had it in you.”

Chloe’s brows went up in surprise at the thinly veiled insult. Oh, no he didn’t.

“Oh, I’ve had it in me several times now,” she replied smoothly. “And I’m pretty sure I’ve pulled it fairly often, too.”

Clark’s jaw hit the floor as he was stunned into silence. From behind her Lois snickered loudly at his obvious discomfort.

Ha, Chloe thought triumphantly. Swallow that, you big douche.


One of the main reasons I always foudn it so hard to ship for Chloe and Clark was the way he never seemed to really see her. SO glad she called him on it here.