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Chlollie Fanfic: Beauty in the Breakdown II - Taking Hold


Chlollie time, Bitches! :-)

 

Still on Hiatus, but thought I should share the next story in the Beauty in the Breakdown Series. 

 

I’ve tied in some back-story which I think makes Oliver’s offer in Warrior a lot clearer.  It also goes some distance in righting that fundamental wrong that the writers chose to ignore: that god-awful Chlollie scene in Requiem that still has a lot of us seething on their behalf.

 

Yes, I do like my challenges. ;-)

 

Enjoy!  Story is rated NC-17, so no minors, please.  Thank you.

 

 

Title:              Beauty in the Breakdown II – Taking Hold

Author:          BabyDee
Pairing:          Chlollie

Rating:           NC-17. Second story in the Series.

Warnings:     Graphic Sex
Timeline:      Season 9 A re-telling of Chlollie post-Warrior

Disclaimer:   All characters belong to the CW & DC comics. 

Series Summary:     With Oliver by her side, Chloe learns to let go, find peace, and fall in love.

Story Summary: Chloe finds unexpected comfort in Oliver’s arms

Feedback:      I crave it! J

 

Written for sxymami0909, based on my favourite song on the Chlollie playlist she sent me. J

 

Awesome banner (under the cut for non-explicit nudity) by the hugely talented ellashy .  Many thanks for letting me use your brilliance, babes!

 

Read Part I here: Letting Go

 

 



Beauty in the Breakdown II

Taking Hold

 

 I want to breathe in a new beginning
With someone who will wrap their arms around what's left of me...

 - 'Had Enough', by Lifehouse featuring Daughtry



A kiss. 

 

That was all she had intended, and all she had promised herself; really, it was.  But the moment her lips touched his, Chloe knew that there was no way she was going to stop until she’d had her fill of everything Oliver had to offer.  She was going all the way with this, no holds barred.

 

His lips were warm, soft and sure against hers.  Strong arms surrounded her and lifted her against him until her toes brushed the floor, literally sweeping her off her feet.  Chloe burrowed her hand into the hair at the back of his neck and deepened the kiss, prising his lips apart with hers and sliding her tongue into his warm mouth. 

 

He tasted sinfully sweet, and the length of his entire body pressed against hers felt even more so.  Chloe could feel his hands stroking her back, sliding down her hips to grasp her bottom firmly.  She shivered, her nipples tingling as a corresponding pleasure pooled deep in her belly.  Her own hands moved of their own accord, sliding down his chest and under the hem of his t-shirt.

 

This is crazy, she thought wildly as her fingers brushed the silken skin covering the firm muscles of his abdomen.  This is Oliver.  We’re not like that.  We never have been. 

 

Which was precisely what she needed, she realised with a start.  She’d spent ten whole years loving a man who hadn’t given her a passing thought, who’d walked away from her when she’d needed him the most.  She’d finally come to terms with the reality that he’d never be hers, and the emptiness of that loss had threatened to consume her. 

 

But then Oliver had made his offer…and she had accepted.  And here they were.  And she didn’t have the slightest clue of how to go about this and what to do next. 

 

She stiffened in his arms, feeling a bit like a deer stuck in the headlights.  Oliver clearly sensed her hesitation because he lifted his head from hers and held her gaze. 

 

“Stop thinking,” he whispered.  “Don’t try to make sense of things just now.” 

 

“I…I don’t know what to do,” she said fearfully. 

 

“Just do whatever you feel, Chloe,” he said.  “There’s no form or order to this.  Like I said earlier, just take whatever you want.” 

 

She stared up at him, seeing empathy and understanding in his brown eyes.  She still wasn’t sure how this was going to solve things at the end of the day, but it was a tempting opportunity she’d never had before and would likely never get again. 

 

“Hey!”

 

She blinked as Oliver tapped her forehead.  “What did I just say?” he said sternly.  "Stop thinking." 

 

Chloe swallowed, and decided to heed his advice and stop thinking. 

 

Her hands went around his neck and she pulled his head down and pressed her lips to his, hard. 

 

***

 

A strange sense of exhilaration enveloped her the moment she threw caution to the winds and gave in to what she was feeling.  There was no contemplating, cautious consideration or second-guessing.  She became a living Nike ad: Just Do It.

 

Oliver’s arms tightened around her and she clung to him fiercely, her kisses becoming more demanding and insistent.  Heat flared and sizzled between them, almost shocking her with its intensity, but for once in her life she didn’t freeze up or back away; she wanted more. Still kissing him, she put her hands on his shoulders and pushed him backward until the backs of his legs hit the couch. 

 

Her scrambling fingers found the edge of his t-shirt and yanked it upward.  Quickly Oliver took over, untangling his arms from the confining garment and yanking it over his head.  She took the opportunity to slide her panties down and kick them off while he sat on the couch. 

 

Chloe climbed into his lap, straddling him as she claimed his lips yet again.  Oliver’s tongue tangled with hers as he stroked his hands up her spread thighs, his fingertips leaving a trail of sparks in their wake.  Chloe shuddered and moaned against his mouth, running her hands frantically up and down his back before eventually burrowing them into his hair. 

 

Oliver returned her kisses with equal intensity as he continued to tease her thighs with soft caresses.  Chloe frowned, feeling almost…annoyed, as if he were patronising her.  She appreciated that he was clearly letting her stay in control, but she wasn’t in the mood for gentle, light touches.  She wanted it hard and rough; needed to feel him pounding into her with reckless abandon, caution be damned.

 

She nibbled her way across his jaw and caught his earlobe between her teeth, scoring her fingers down his chest as she pressed herself up against him.  Oliver inhaled sharply and his hands tightened on her thighs, pushing them further apart and hiking the fabric of her skirt up her legs.  Much better. 

 

Chloe shifted until Oliver’s solid erection pressed up against her moist heat.  She reached down with one hand and managed to get the zipper on his pants unfastened, then reached into his underwear and wrapped her hand around him.  Oliver groaned harshly, his breath coming in short gasps as she slid her hand up and down his length with firm strokes. 

 

“Chloe,” he whispered.  His hips involuntarily bucked forward at her touch, causing him to brush against her intimately.   She kept a firm grip on him and tried to guide him in, but to her intense frustration, she couldn’t get him more than an inch inside her.  He was fairly huge, and she either wasn’t quite ready yet, or it had just been that long since she’d had any action; probably a combination of both. 

 

Fortunately Oliver had matters in hand – literally.  He reached between them and drew his thumb lightly through her dewy moisture, and then brushed it over her throbbing clit, making her gasp and shudder as a jolt of raw sexual pleasure ran through her.  He continued to tease the sensitive nub with his thumb and she moaned as her body responded and thrummed with arousal, getting slicker and wetter at his touch.  He slid a finger into her snug warmth and thrust gently back and forth, eliciting a choked sob from Chloe’s throat. 

 

“It’s okay,” he murmured, maintaining the slow thrust of his finger and the gentle caress of his thumb on her clit.  “Just relax…” 

 

A second finger joined the first, stretching her gradually.  Chloe’s nails dug into his shoulders and another low moan escaped her as stark need gathered in the pit of her aching core and threatened to floor her.  She needed him inside her – now. 

 

One hand closed around his shaft and she started to guide him into her, but he resisted.  “Not yet,” he whispered raggedly. 

 

Tears of frustration sprang to her eyes.  He couldn’t stop again, not now.  “Oliver please, I need you…”

 

“You’ll get me, don’t worry,” he reassured her as he shifted his hips upward and dug into his back pocket.  “But I need to be responsible first.”  He sat down again, a shiny foil wrapper in his hand.

 

Protection.  Condom. 

 

Chloe took a deep breath and nodded.  “Of course.” 

 

“I’ll just put this on.”  He tore open the packet and she bit her lip nervously as he smoothed it on.  In her frenzied state of arousal she’d forgotten all about protection.  Fortunately Oliver hadn’t; though a small, cautious part of her did question why he walked around with condoms in his pocket. 

 

Then she realised she’d started thinking again.  And when Oliver’s sheathed hardness prodded her entrance, she promptly decided that thinking was overrated and totally counterproductive at this juncture. 

 

Oliver held her hips and guided her onto him, pressing into her inch by inch.  Chloe gasped as he stretched and filled her.  It was still a tight fit, but her body was ready this time, so he could slide in without much difficulty.  Oliver tilted his hips forward and simultaneously pulled her closer and suddenly he was all the way inside, filling her completely.  Chloe wrapped her arms around his neck and took deep breaths, waiting while her body adjusted to his size. 


“Are you alright?” he asked quietly, his warm hands stroked her back through the green silk.

 

She nodded.  “I’m fine.” 

 

As soon as she felt more comfortable she shifted experimentally, moving on him with shallow thrusts.  Sensation raced along her nerves and she went a bit faster, picking up the pace as the pressure began to build deep within.  Oliver matched her thrusts and pumped hard into her, a fine sheen of sweat breaking out on his golden skin. 

 

Chloe hooked her arms around Oliver’s and fucked him hard, riding out all her pent-up emotion with every thrust.  He drove into her, making her need spiral higher and higher until she breached the pinnacle.  She shuddered and cried out at the onslaught of sensation, clinging to his broad shoulders as her body rippled and spasmed around his hard length. 

 

The intensity faded from her limbs and she collapsed against him, breathing hard.  Oliver threaded a hand into her hair and held her to him, stroking her back gently through the silk shirt with his other hand.  Chloe wrapped her arms around his waist and closed her eyes, resting her head in the crook of his shoulder as she enjoyed the slow drift back down to earth. 

 

She felt liberated.  It was as if she’d been on the edge of what she’d thought was a very steep cliff and finally jumped off, only to land on a safety ledge a few feet below and discover that she hadn’t been too far from the ground, after all. 

 

A contented smile lifted the corners of her mouth as she drifted off to the steady beat of Oliver’s heart against hers.  She’d let go.  She was free.

 

*** 

 

Oliver couldn’t remember the last time he’d had sex without getting an orgasm out of it – probably because before tonight, it was something he’d never experienced.  Ironically, he’d never been more post-coitally satisfied in his life.

 

He smiled wryly to himself and continued to stroke her back and her hair long after she’d fallen asleep in his arms.  

 

Chloe Sullivan had always been a bit of an enigma to him.  In the beginning she’d just been his girlfriend’s cute little cousin with the infectious smile, and beyond that he hadn’t given her much thought.  Until she’d showed up in his apartment and revealed that she’d sussed his super-hero alter-ego all by herself.  Then she’d single-handedly guided him and the team, including Clark, through a very hairy mission at a moment’s notice, and he realised he was dealing with the most intelligent, knowledgeable woman he’d ever encountered. 

 

But just when he thought he’d figured her out, she’d gotten engaged to Jimmy Olsen, completely altering his perception of her.  To say he’d been surprised was an understatement; her allegiance and affection clearly lay with Clark, so much so that she protected a serial killer to keep him safe.  Whatever her reasons were for marrying Jimmy remained a mystery, because it clearly hadn’t been out of love for him. 

 

Oliver frowned, deep in thought.  So many of her actions and decisions at that time had been marred by the influence of Brainiac, the alien supercomputer that had taken over her – once again, when she’d been helping Clark clean up one of his messes.  And it was apparent that after they’d managed to get rid of Brainiac, she’d been left to deal with the fallout of a marriage she’d pretty much been forced into, with the added distraction of a monster who wouldn’t leave her alone.  Needless to say, the consequences had been tragic, and the one person who should have stood by her, didn’t. 

 

But Oliver was under no illusions that he himself had been blameless.  A catalogue of errors and a botched rescue mission had cost Jimmy Olsen and several others their lives, and he’d walked away from Chloe too; so wrapped up in his own failure that he’d left a vulnerable, grieving woman alone and defenceless. 

 

But she’d surprised him yet again.  Not only had she managed to pick up her own life and keep going, she’d also gone to great lengths get the team back together.  Finally, she’d orchestrated a virtual slap upside his own head to basically get his leather-clad ass back in hero gear. 

 

He stroked her shimmering hair again, immensely grateful.  She didn’t have to do that.  She certainly didn’t owe him anything, not after the way he’d used her affection for Clark to blackmail her into keeping his own dark secret, threatening to blame her for the reprehensible actions of the computer that had dictated her actions for months. 

 

It was one of the many reasons he owed her this.  A human being could only take so many knocks without cracking, and while Chloe was stronger than most people, even she had her breaking point.  He knew how gutted he’d felt when Lois had picked Clark over him, so he could only imagine the intense pain Chloe must have experienced when Clark – after all she’d been through for him – had rejected her completely and gone after her cousin.  It was enough to drive a person crazy. 

 

So he’d made his unconventional offer, and she’d surprised him – yet again – by taking him up on it.  He wasn’t sure she completely understood his motives; after all, any sane person would immediately think he was nothing but a horny socialite looking for the next notch on his bedpost.  But it couldn’t be further from the truth, and he hoped she’d give him the opportunity to explain exactly why he’d offered her full use of his body.  Maybe now, he could at least begin to atone for how badly he had wronged her. 

 

So yes, he owed her this and a lot more.  Now that she’d gotten all that emotional baggage out of her system, she would no doubt feel confused and full of self-reproach; but he’d be here for her when she woke up.  They’d talk then.

 

He brushed his fingers over her hair one last time, and then wrapped his arms around her and allowed his eyelids to drift shut.

 

***

 

The End.

 

 

Out Now: Beauty in the Breakdown, Reaching Out

 

*** 

 



OMG!!!! I totally LOVE it honey! Loving this series!!

Thanks, Jan - and I'm totally loving the new icon! :-)

Yay, an update! *claps* I'm really enjoying your take on this scenes and what was going on in both of their heads. I like how Oliver let Chloe take control so she could get what she needed without worrying about himself. It's interesting that you brought up that scene in Requiem because I just watched that episode again last night and that scene is still a huge WTF. I like that you had Ollie feeling guilty and realizing just how horrible that was. I also love that he obviously wants more from Chloe and he's willing to go at her pace. *sigh* Awesome job. :)

"Yay, an update! *claps*"

I'm making progress, slowly but surely! :-)

"I'm really enjoying your take on this scenes and what was going on in both of their heads."

TPTB forced me into it, since they're the knobheads who relegated most of their development to Offscreenville!

"I like how Oliver let Chloe take control so she could get what she needed without worrying about himself."

I know, right? Top bloke, love him to bits. And what an offer. *le sigh...*

"It's interesting that you brought up that scene in Requiem because I just watched that episode again last night and that scene is still a huge WTF."

Total swear-word scene, totally unnecessary. Which I think they realised, but only when it was too late, and in typical fashion TPTB just swept it under the rug and hoped we'd forget. Bastards. :-(

" also love that he obviously wants more from Chloe and he's willing to go at her pace."

Oliver's wonderful, and I hate the direction they've taken his character in this season. They're trying to dumb him down and make him look bad so that Clark can shine in comparison. Not working, Clark is still SuperDouche and always will be.

Glad you like it, babes! :-)

OMG D...this was amazing! Quite literal just beautifully written. I love how you delves into their minds and get into all this backstory about their feelings and the things going through their head in the moment! You write them so so well and in character that I can picture this! And OMG the thing about being a Nike add..Juast Do it HAHHAAH I died! Best Line EVER!

God..so so beuatiful this was just what I needed today! :-D

"OMG D...this was amazing! Quite literal just beautifully written. I love how you delves into their minds and get into all this backstory about their feelings and the things going through their head in the moment!"

Well, someone's gotta do it, since TPTB are clearly not up to the task!!! :-P

"You write them so so well and in character that I can picture this!"

Kudos to Justin and Allison who play them so beautifully and make it so easy for me. :-)

"And OMG the thing about being a Nike add..Juast Do it HAHHAAH I died! Best Line EVER!"

Hee! Not half as good as your's & Sly's Creme Pie one, but it'll have to do! :-D

So glad you liked it, Cori, and thanks again for inspiring me with your Chlollie playlist! :-)

Dee, you know you are a genius, right? Because if you don't I will tell you lol. What an amazing piece of work once again. As always your writing is flawless and just perfect and wonderful. "She became a living Nike ad: Just Do It." I really laughed so hard at this.

"Dee, you know you are a genius, right? Because if you don't I will tell you lol."

*blushes* Aw, bless your little heart for making me smile, Mia! :-D

I'm especially thankful because I wasn't feeling this chapter as much as the last one, and wasn't sure how it was reading, but I didn't want to over-edit because it might have lost substance. Thanks again!

"As always your writing is flawless and just perfect and wonderful."

My head is swelling like a balloon, and needs draining...! :-P

""She became a living Nike ad: Just Do It." I really laughed so hard at this."

Hee! Glad you like, hun. And of course, she Just Did It. ;-)

Yay! another story! and very hot too....

I liked Oliver trying to give back coz he felt he owed her and that he doesn't really fully realise that he has already fallen into the Chloe love trap...and Chloe throwing caution to the wind and thinking it will probably be a one off (lol as if those two could ever be as a one off)

as always awesome writing Dee totally loving your stories - next please :-)

(and yes I know you are on hiatus but you know me always going to push for the next one coz i love reading them !! :-) )

"Yay! another story! and very hot too...."

Glad you approve, my sweet! :-P

"I liked Oliver trying to give back coz he felt he owed her and that he doesn't really fully realise that he has already fallen into the Chloe love trap..."

It only takes the once to get them to succumb to each other. You can bet on it. ;-)

"...and Chloe throwing caution to the wind and thinking it will probably be a one off (lol as if those two could ever be as a one off)"

I know, right? Good thing with this series is that since Chloe has had her big, cathartic moment where she's let go of Clark, there will be none of the silliness that plagued her throughout Realsies. Thing is, I know I planned 3 or 4 stories for this series, but it'll probably end up being 5. Grr! But they'll all be oneshots, fingers crossed, which is why I can get them out faster. :-)

"as always awesome writing Dee totally loving your stories - next please :-)

(and yes I know you are on hiatus but you know me always going to push for the next one coz i love reading them !! :-) )"


Ha! You'll wait your turn, Missy. I have to write some Chlark smut before my Muse deserts me completely. But this one won't be too far behind. :-)

Thanks for your lovely comments!

Edited at 2010-11-27 06:04 pm (UTC)

Thanks, Ziva. Glad you like it! :-)

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Thanks very much, DayDreamer - glad you liked it! :-)

Hot and sweet, but also realistic. I love that he has to keep telling her to stop thinking, and that little moment where she gets irritated that he's patronizing her by being too gentle. I also thought his take on why she married Jimmy was very interesting. Lovely update!

Jimmy was a mistake from start to finish, and the whole wedding thing was a stupid joke. Then they made it funnier by revealing that he was never Jimmy to begin with. What a hot mess that all was.

I'm convinced Chloe would never have married Jimmy if Brainiac weren't in her head. She could never be herself with him, and she was far too embroiled in the super-hero world to think she could have a normal life. Finally and most importantly, she never loved him. Even when he lay dying in her arms and told her he loved her, she never said it back to him.

That's my canon take on it, full stop. :-)

Glad you liked it, babes. Can't wait for the next story in the Firsts Series! :-)

Love it! I can't wait for the next one. I love hearing Ollies thoughts, he's just a stand up guy.

Oliver's brilliant. He's very layered, but without any attending complexity, which makes him very easy for me to write. It's one of the reasons I run away from writing Lex (much as I love him), because he's layered and complex. :-)

Glad you like it, and thanks for your awesome comments!

oh... i am totally loving this series... you are such a great writer... god, i need more of this...

Thanks for your lovely words, my sweet!

And thanks for that gif; it's giving me dirty thoughts, it is! *fans self* :-P

That was hot :D but also very sweet because Chloe finally let go! And Ollie is so good at taking care of her. Love him! I'm so glad you did another story, I can't wait for the next one! Awesome as always Dee :D Great job!

"That was hot :D but also very sweet because Chloe finally let go! And Ollie is so good at taking care of her. Love him!"

It's unanimous: Oliver's amazing! :-D

"I'm so glad you did another story, I can't wait for the next one!"

Workin' on it! :-)

"Awesome as always Dee :D Great job!"

So glad you like it, Jenn! :-)

Edited at 2010-11-28 10:55 am (UTC)

We like WOW; we like it a lot!!!

Thanks, hun! :-D

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*blushes* Thanks, Stef! The lack of onscreen Chlollie development just galls me. After the way Chloe cried when she was holding Alec on the rooftop, no-one can tell me she wasn't severely traumatised. And for the show to just present the introduction to Chlollie as 'Chloe, let's have sex.' 'Okay.' was just wrong on so many levels. If they don't know how to write a convincing love story, I'll do it myself! :)

So glad you like it, babes!

AMAZING!! HOTT!! SEXY!!

This was just so full of amazing. Love the inner thoughts of Chloe and Oliver. So he pretty developed a crush on her without even realizing it.
Plus the whole thing with Jimmy, now when I really look at it, it is more of a like WTF? moment.
Wonderful udate!

"AMAZING!! HOTT!! SEXY!!"

THANK YOU! THANK YOU!! THANK YOU!!! :-D

"This was just so full of amazing. Love the inner thoughts of Chloe and Oliver. So he pretty developed a crush on her without even realizing it."

That's the best way, methinks! :-P

"Plus the whole thing with Jimmy, now when I really look at it, it is more of a like WTF? moment."

It certainly is, babes. Total cockblock from Day One. Twats.

"Wonderful update!"

Thank yew, glad you like!!! :-D

A kiss.

That was all she had intended, and all she had promised herself; really, it was.


uh huh, sure I believe you. *scoffs* I do, really I do!!!

She was going all the way with this, no holds barred.

Now that's what I'm talking about!!!!

His lips were warm, soft and sure against hers. Strong arms surrounded her and lifted her against him until her toes brushed the floor, literally sweeping her off her feet.

That's what Chloe needed!! For a guy to just sweep her off her feet and have his way with her, 'til she had no doubt in her mind that she was wanted!!!!!

This is crazy, she thought wildly as her fingers brushed the silken skin covering the firm muscles of his abdomen. This is Oliver. We’re not like that. We never have been.

But dammit you should of been from the moment he appeared, you two should of been doing it like bunnies!!! None of the fake Jimmy stuff!!!!!!!!!!!!

Which was precisely what she needed, she realised with a start. She’d finally come to terms with the reality that he’d never be hers, and the emptiness of that loss had threatened to consume her.

He's a douche, a SuperDouche of EPIC proportions but forget about that asshole and focus on that wonderful man that has issues about wearing a shirt!!!!!!!!

“Just do whatever you feel, Chloe,” he said. “There’s no form or order to this. Like I said earlier, just take whatever you want.”

Yes, have your way with him!!! Please, oh please take him and take him hard!!!!!!!!

Chloe swallowed, and decided to heed his advice and stop thinking.

Her hands went around his neck and she pulled his head down and pressed her lips to his, hard.


Now that's my girl!!!!!!!!

She became a living Nike ad: Just Do It.

Hmmm how about Just Do Oliver!!?!?!

Oliver’s arms tightened around her and she clung to him fiercely, her kisses becoming more demanding and insistent. Heat flared and sizzled between them, almost shocking her with its intensity, but for once in her life she didn’t freeze up or back away; she wanted more. Still kissing him, she put her hands on his shoulders and pushed him backward until the backs of his legs hit the couch.

My god, you're are going to kill me from all this smoldering hotness!!!! Highly upset that we didn't get this on screen because if these two could heat it up with eye and finger sex they would of melted t.v. screens if they would of had the actual sex!!!!

Quickly Oliver took over, untangling his arms from the confining garment and yanking it over his head. She took the opportunity to slide her panties down and kick them off while he sat on the couch.

Well she isn't wasting time!!! I like it!!!

Oliver returned her kisses with equal intensity as he continued to tease her thighs with soft caresses. Chloe frowned, feeling almost…annoyed, as if he were patronising her. She appreciated that he was clearly letting her stay in control, but she wasn’t in the mood for gentle, light touches. She wanted it hard and rough; needed to feel him pounding into her with reckless abandon, caution be damned.

WOW!!! *gulps* You are seriously killing me!!!!

Then she realised she’d started thinking again. And when Oliver’s sheathed hardness prodded her entrance, she promptly decided that thinking was overrated and totally counterproductive at this juncture.

hahfnajkwnfbawjkenfaoi foawij jowri u9opr3mk f0 sjd!!!!!!!! Hmmm well I guess now we know how Oliver got Chloe to stop thinking and just let go!!!!!

Chloe hooked her arms around Oliver’s and fucked him hard, riding out all her pent-up emotion with every thrust. He drove into her, making her need spiral higher and higher until she breached the pinnacle. She shuddered and cried out at the onslaught of sensation, clinging to his broad shoulders as her body rippled and spasmed around his hard length.

Thank you!!! That's all I asked for!!!! So are you a cigarette smoking chick or the one that lays there with a goofy grin on her face???? I'm the goofy grin kind... XD

continued because apparently I talk to much!!!

Re: FB pt 1 - Sorry this is coming so late!!!

"uh huh, sure I believe you. *scoffs* I do, really I do!!!"

Oh, be nice, Purple Moon! ;-)

"Now that's what I'm talking about!!!!"

Yay, go Chloe! :-P

"That's what Chloe needed!! For a guy to just sweep her off her feet and have his way with her, 'til she had no doubt in her mind that she was wanted!!!!!"

Well, she's certainly got it now! :-)

"But dammit you should of been from the moment he appeared, you two should of been doing it like bunnies!!! None of the fake Jimmy stuff!!!!!!!!!!!!"

*groans* Please don't mention Jimmy, I beg you. I despise that fool. :-P

"He's a douche, a SuperDouche of EPIC proportions but forget about that asshole and focus on that wonderful man that has issues about wearing a shirt!!!!!!!!"

That's certainly a big improvement! :-D

"Yes, have your way with him!!! Please, oh please take him and take him hard!!!!!!!!"

Don't worry - I'm sure she will! ;-)

"Hmmm how about Just Do Oliver!!?!?!"

Excellent advice! I would take it myself, but alas, Oliver's already taken. :-D

"My god, you're are going to kill me from all this smoldering hotness!!!! Highly upset that we didn't get this on screen because if these two could heat it up with eye and finger sex they would of melted t.v. screens if they would of had the actual sex!!!!"

Our screens wouldn't have been able to handle it, and neither would TPTB. It would have been like, 'Clois who?' :-P

"Well she isn't wasting time!!! I like it!!!"

Straight to business, oh yes. I like this one! :-D

"WOW!!! *gulps* You are seriously killing me!!!!"

Stay alive, hun. Can't have you kicking it before they actually get down to business!!! :-P

"hahfnajkwnfbawjkenfaoi foawij jowri u9opr3mk f0 sjd!!!!!!!!"

I love it when the keyboard disintegrates - it means I have done my job well!!! :-D

"Thank you!!! That's all I asked for!!!! So are you a cigarette smoking chick or the one that lays there with a goofy grin on her face???? I'm the goofy grin kind... XD"

Goofy grin, babes, goofy grin. Welcome to the party!!!

"continued because apparently I talk to much!!!"

Never censure yourself on my journal, PM. Feel free to be as garrulous as you like - the longer, the better!

Sorry I'm replying so late, hun. *cuddles*

Edited at 2011-03-29 12:57 pm (UTC)

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